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Further research

Ogma
I spent a goodly chunk of this evening delving about in books, looking up potential healing deities and other figures, and found quite a number listed here and there. I'm still chasing down some others. I found a note that may be of interest to alfrecht and will be typing up a quick quote and sending it off to him in a little bit.

In pursuit of some of my research I have had cause to attempt to read Táin Bó Flidhais: "The Mayo Táin" by Stephen Dunford. I have a sneaking suspicion that he stabbed a thesaurus and let it bleed out onto the pages. It isn't pretty. It gets the story across, but his language is labored and not at all imitative of Early and Middle Irish tales. He cannot resist using some verbal detritus or other when a simple (or even a poetic) word will do. Here, for your delectation, is a sample sentence from this overwrought monstrosity:

Then, as her bosom throbbed and heaved with the quick deleterious pulsation and palsy of grief, and with her fair and beautiful face blanched with streaming tears, her ululating yowls of lamentation echoing united and multitudinous across the landscape, falling and rising in lingering cadences, Flidhais commenced a doleful and remorseful dirge in which she ruefully recalled and recounted every worthy action of her deceased husband and of his hallowed and atavistic progenitors.

As you can see, not much to recommend this version. It is, mercifully, slim.

gra_is_stor's mom and one of her sisters will be in town shortly. Her mom may come to the Abney Park show with us tomorrow, and they will both probably join us on Sunday for the bad movie festival. We'll be viewing the two Dr Phibes movies and Mars Attacks. It should be fun.

Dishes were done. Food was had. Research was compiled. All in all, not a bad day.

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storyfan
Jan. 19th, 2013 10:17 am (UTC)
I know absolutely nothing about the subject matter, but that thing is purpler than any purple prose I've ever read.

I once had a writing teacher who said "don't use a 25-cent word when a nickel word will do." Mr. Dunford should have followed this advice.
erynn999
Jan. 19th, 2013 09:48 pm (UTC)
Some of the actual source material is kind of purple as well, but this is all about really poor word choice. ;)
martianmooncrab
Jan. 19th, 2013 11:01 am (UTC)
and Mars Attacks

ack ack ack ack ackkkk
erynn999
Jan. 21st, 2013 09:59 am (UTC)
DO NOT RUN WE ARE YOUR FRIENDS!
martianmooncrab
Jan. 21st, 2013 10:12 am (UTC)
yeah, right, thats why we are carrying their really cool space blasters...
erynn999
Jan. 21st, 2013 10:16 am (UTC)
They're only models...
siorathru
Jan. 20th, 2013 05:57 pm (UTC)
Can we say overwritten? Ugh, I feel dazed after reading that.
erynn999
Jan. 21st, 2013 10:00 am (UTC)
I know. Frightening, innit?
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erynn999
Jan. 21st, 2013 10:00 am (UTC)
Your icon, it shares my braincell on this matter.
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